Canvas Poets

While I’m Alive

by: Kryptonight83

As the story is told
A pedal falls
It trickles through time
And keeps a constant rhyme.

The flower of life
Begins to die
And yet the waves grow
Pushing against the wind’s blow.

That beautiful pedal
Soon turned into ash
Sinks to the bottom
Although, never forgotten.

The waves return
The ash creates life
A new flower is born
For a pedal to be torn.

(c)2011  Kryptonight83


About onecanvasonesoul

I'm an artist of the poetic persuasion yet I dabble in papercrafts, art journaling and scrapbooking!


4 thoughts on “While I’m Alive

  1. Life and death go hand in hand; The only cycle never to be broken.

    Beautiful piece, my friend. Congrats! 🙂


    Posted by emilysixxrants | October 15, 2011, 9:36 am
  2. Congrats Andres! I didn’t know you had the creative writing bug. I like this poem. The rhymes are nice but not over the top. Great job!


    Posted by michelle f | October 15, 2011, 9:33 pm
  3. Love the rhyme of forgotten and bottom. Very nice poem!


    Posted by zumpoems | October 20, 2011, 8:58 am

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